The year is 1997. I am in grade 1. I am six years old. And I have no idea what this story is really about. A writing sample from my grade 1 assessment journal. Montana Drive can be found close to my primary school. I can't recall a Yappy Road. Throw Up Thursday. 3 April 1997. No Title
by Daniel Murphy One night a little girl went out in the middle of the earth and she wanted a home. She was very sad because she wanted to have grone ups and a house. She looked in the contry. She looked in the city. She looked in the towns. She looked in dead end roads but she could'dnt find a home. She found a person walking along the footpath and said to her, "Where is a nice house to live in" "I've seen one down on Motana Drive" "Thanks" So she went to Yappy Road to Matana Drive. She had found a home. When she groow up sheed have children. So she did. And lived ever after.
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